2799

The year is 2799. Toxic fumes smother the planet. The survivors of The Great Toxic War congregate in the fields of Elysium, considering the future of mankind.

Earth as we knew it had changed, the lush, flourishing planet was now a toxic, barren wasteland. Human life was on the verge of extinct.

Back in 2797 dark green fumes began to enter our atmosphere, masking our view from the sun and bringing darkness down upon us. Plants began to wilt and animals and humans were becoming significantly sicker. This deadly gas was a silent killer, sneaking up on people, creeping down their skin, where it was all over before it had begun. I was the first victim in my town to this deadly gas. Suffocation and panic is all I remember as I jolted up in my bed convulsing and grasping for a breath of fresh air, but all I managed to get were the acidic fumes burning my throat. I felt my boyfriends cold touch against my skin as I bounced in and out of consciousness, unaware of my surroundings.

A repetitive pounding in my head and white, blinding lights are what I first saw when I finally regained the ability to force my eyes open. chattering all around and billions of eyes blinking and peering down on me overwhelmed me as I tried to adjust to my new surroundings. I soon discovered I was stuck to the bed, paralysed with only my eyes able to move, bulging out of my bed in disbelief

“It’s a miracle she’s even alive,

POINT OF VIEW

the authors voice and perspective they give

First person– Theres is the voice that the reader hears. The story is told through their eyes. The way this is accomplished is through the use of I

personal pronouns- I, me, you, she, her, him, he, they, them, we, us, you, it, mine, my, mine, our, ours, myself

third person- there are 3 types of third person point of view, omniscient, objective, limited

omniscient- this means all knowing. your narrator knows everything, past present and future. the story is not told through the experience of a character, rather by an all knowing god, looking down on the characters.

the advantage to having an all knowing narrator is that they are able to reveal information or discuss events that the characters do not know. this gives the reader a unique perspective of knowing more than the characters in the story.

objective- this is when the reader has no access to the thoughts of any character. the entire story is told through the things that happen and what is said.

the advantage of this style of point of view is that it forces the author to use show not tell. without the ability to describe what a character is thinking, the author must reveal that through the description of body language, expression or dialogue

limited- this is a style of point of view where the reader has access to a single characters thoughts. the author is able to tell the story through the experiences of one character. but they are also able to describe things the character might not be aware of

while this style has many similarities to first person point of view. this type of point of view allows the author greater freedom than in first person. if a story is told in third person limited, a little more information can be shared since all of the characters are being discussed as if they are being looked down upon by the reader, rather than seen through one characters eyes.

SHOW NOT TELL

creates a much deeper connection and brings readers closer you, or the main character. it creates empathy and invests the reader.

this allows the reader to feel what the character is feeling. surprise and the sense of urgency, the fear.

use the 5 senses and rewrite sentences using show not tell

5 senses- taste, hear, smell, feel, see

The boy was sad- Sadness and despair washed over him as his eyes became glazed and two single tears streamed down his face. The tears, more constant now, streamed down, leaving dewy streaks painted across his miserable expression. Muffled noises and sniffles barely escape his mouth as the despair he is feeling has driven him into silence.

The dog wanted to go for a walk- My old dog Johnny stumbled to his feet, barely holding himself up. I could tell by his uneven, wheezy breathing that he was eager to leave the comforts of his bed and embark on an adventure into nearby forest, where the woody smells would invigorate his partially impaired senses. He was on his last leg of life, literally

When they embraced she could tell he had been smoking and was scared- The pungent, suffocating stench filled her lungs and closed up her airways as she embraced Jerry. He was not the same caring person she fell involve with, what has happened ? Fear and uncertainty fogs up her mind as she is trapped in the strong embrace, unable to escape.

The temperature fell and the ice reflected the sun- The last light of day retreats behind the snow covered mountains, in attempt to escape the approaching cold weather. The local peasants wrap up in their winter garments to try block out the bone chilling temperatures. As words are exchanged, the phrases are painted in the sky as frosty clouds.

Prepositions

they are important tools for creating variety and meaning in description

they are words used to describe a relationship between two or more things

they can be a spatial relationship (her bag was under the chair)

a time relationship (they arrived on Monday)

a manner in which something is done (they went by car)

prepositions allow the reader to navigate your scene. They help build connections between the things and the scene. they develop a 3D impression of your scene in the readers mind.

On the brilliant blue chair sat the girl, mind deep in the book. Above the girl, towers of books stacked up towards the sky. On and on the books continued into the distance, creating a magnificent world. Through the sky, the delicate pages ruffled in the wind as the words danced along the page.

Hyperbole

The purpose of it is to enhance for effect. By over exaggerating you can imply the importance and significance of a certain thing

taste- scrumptious,

smell- crisp,

see- captivating,

hear- exquisite,

feel- luxurious,

I was glued to my bed, unable to lift my limbs from the irresistible comforts of my bed.

the magnificently snow capped mountains reached up past the stars and moon.

the green spongey moss caressed the feet of those who stepped on it and acted like a trampoline for kids to jump on

endless fields of vibrant indigo flowers cover the undulating terrain, stretching on forever

Big Ben reaches up towards god, waving and looking down upon the British people

Personification

5 words to personify things

table-long legs, strong, sturdy, stubborn, standing

headphones- sing, scream, speak, whisper, clammer

chair- strong, old, comforting, helpful

computer- intelligent, genius, helpful, companion

book- boring, thick, beefy, knowledgable, wise

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the tree, cold and frail, longed and reached out for the warmth of the sun

The fog hugged its surroundings like a mother embracing her child

the mountains stood tall, watching down upon the world from above

the trees stepped aside to allow the visitors to walk through and experience the beauty

the old house shivers as the cold breeze rattles its bones

METAPHORS AND SIMILIES

Metaphor –

Does not use like or as and links more directly by saying it is

Allows us to gain an understanding of a person or thing because of our knowledge of a shared trait

Simile- uses like or as, they are similar in some way

gain an understanding of a person or thing because of the knowledge of the shared trait.

life is like a hike, the climb is hard but the view at the top is worth it

death is like winter, as the cold comes the trees go bare

life is a map, you choose which path you go on

death is like a sparkler, it burns and fizzles but eventually goes out

life is like an onion, there are many layers and stages

home is like Antarctica, we have no heating

my room is like a dolls house, designed for a 6 year old

my house is like a palace and im Elsa

my brother is like a mosquito, annoying and doesn’t go away

my home is like a hotel, we always have unexpected visitors

the sun is like hope, there is always brightness in every day

the ocean

Creative writing

Jerry’s trial and new life in prison- prison adventures

who is your character and where is it happening?– My character is Jerry Lundeguarrd and this is happening in the district court in Brainard but afterwards he is transferred to the Minnesota correctional facility

what is your inciting incident and how do you get there? when Jerry’s illegal actions have caught up with him and the court has decided he is guilty

where do you cross the threshold? when Jerry enters the prison he is crossing the threshold

how does action rise? as Jerry enters prison and begins his new life, isolated with no-one

when does your main character get knocked down? Jerry is fresh meat in prison and at the correctional facility and some of the big boys beat him up in the shower rooms. he is put in an isolation room because is vulnerable

why does your character get back up? while in isolation he is left to ponder about what is happening on the outside. what his son is doing? where Gaear is? he is driven to get out of prison and devises a plan

what is a natural climax for your character? Jerry makes a break from prison, tricks the guards and flees the correctional facility, killing 2 guards on his escape

how will they ‘return home’? he’s back in town, he hunts down the orphanage that Scottie is at and kidnaps him

“After receiving the information here in front of me today, I hereby find Mr Lundeguarrd guilty and sentence him to 20 years in the Minnesota correctional facility”. The judge hits down the gavel, sending a silencing sound throughout the courtroom, creating an eerie presence all around

“Analyse how film techniques were used to present an idea in the text”

If a genie gave you three wishes what would they be ? for most, the idea of ‘having more money’ or ‘unlimited wishes’ sounds great, but these thoughts are too often driven by the idea of greed; wanting more than you really need. Greed and money come hand in hand, where this selfish desire for money and power take the reins over what is morally right. The movie “Fargo”, directed by the Coen Brothers utilises key film techniques and displays many characters that present the idea of greed throughout the film. Specific characters shown in a low angle, Carl’s dialogue, and Jerry Lundeguaard only seen in one shots are all film techniques that the Coen brothers have intelligently used to portray the concept of greed and the powerful forces behind it.

S– The Coen Brothers utilise the idea of low angles as a powerful film technique to display the characters that are seen as more dominant and greedy. E– To become more dominant and powerful it is often assumed that money is the answer to all of these problems. Carl, Gaear, and Jerry are all driven by the thought of money, where their greed and desire has blurred out any morals they may have previously had, and is compelling them towards one end goal. throughout the movie, these characters are seen in numerous low angles which gives the audience the impression that they have dominance and power in the situation. It is clear to see that all of these characters believe that with more money comes more superiority and so from them being seen in a low angle, it shows what they desire to have. It is an illusion, a mask to the real world as they do not have as much dominance as they desire, but merely believe they do. When you focus on something so much, it becomes a false reality and the truth behind it becomes forgotten as the need and want for something takes over, where just that ‘one thing’ is in perspective. Your perspective refers to your outlook and view on something and for these characters wanting more money than they need is what they see as right. These characters become so wound up in the fantasy of ‘becoming rich’ and executing their plan that they already believe they have succeeded and are already more powerful. X- Carl is often depicted as a authoritative character and this is skilfully shown in the scene where he obtains the one million dollars, killing Wade in his path. Just after he shoots Wade in the stomach there is a low angle on Carl showing his immediate dominance in the scene. Carl believes he has already succeeded, has gained total power, because he has gotten rid of the obstacle in his path and acquired the money. His dominance in the scene has come from shooting a character of high status and wealth where as Wade dies and loses all power, Carl supposedly wins and gains all power and money. This overwhelming greed he has, has driven him to shoot an innocent man as money is the only thing he is focused on, driving him to do inhumane things. Y- Everyone is greedy for something, whether it be food, money or power. Money is only desired for material goods and what we can get for it but it is often said that “the love of money is the root of evil”. This money desired is due to greed, and the power it has obscures a persons outlook on something and drives them to believe things that may not be true or morally right at all. Gold, diamonds and jewels are all desirable material possessions and for Jafar in the popular Disney movie ‘Aladdin’ he will not stop until he is the most powerful authority in the world. In this case the idea of obtaining the lamp and getting all power is what is driving him into complete insanity. The idea of power driven by greed is reinforced by showing Afar in a low angle as he is becoming the most powerful being in the universe- the genie. The emotion of greed is a feeling that everyone experiences in one way or another but what differentiates people is the lengths they go to to get what they desire.

S- The use of dialogue is a crucial element in the movie as it conveys Carls character development and his greed for money. E- Dialogue is a key element of film as it explains plot and allows characters to express what they are thinking, as well as displaying their personalities. Carl is a key character throughout the movie and his opinion and thoughts are constantly voiced by what he says. He talks a big game and makes some pretty big calls that are solely made because of his compelling desire for money, driven by greed. Every mistake, action and move he makes is under the influence of greed, being too obsessed over the idea of wealth to be aware of what he is doing and saying. Irritable, incompetent and temperamental are all words used to describe the small time criminal Carl, where he’s an accident waiting to happen, a ticking time bomb. His easily aggravated personality makes him vulnerable in the movie as he exposes his plan along the way as well as expressing his opinions using a lot of foul language and angry tones. The way something is said also shows a lot about a character as the type of language used displays parts of characters personalities. Half of what comes out of Carl’s mouth is either a swear word or rude phrase and this dialogue shows his negativity due to greed. Carl becomes so captivated by the thought of becoming rich that it drives him to do and say things he would normally never even think of. X- After returning back to the cabin in the woods Carl gets in the fight with Gaear over the money and car, both things they both want. “Hold on! No fuckin’ way! You fuckin’ notice this? I got fuckin’ shot! I got fuckin’ shot in the face! I went and got the fuckin’ money. I got shot fuckin’ picking it up! I’ve been up for 36 fuckin’ hours! I’m taking that fuckin’ car! That fucker’s mine, you fuckin’ asshole! As always Gaear has no response, but Carl rambles on repeating himself over and over trying to get his point across about the lengths and efforts he went through just to get the money. He paid a high price to get the prize he desired and even with the one million dollars he was not satisfied, he craved more. The repetitive use of the words “Fuckin” show that Carl is extremely angry and this greed he has, has obscured his rational thinking, causing him to be fuelled by outrage. Y- We can tell a lot about a person by what they say. Dialogue and face to face interaction is crucial in everyones life, as the emotions you portray dictate a large part of if someone wants to be friends with you. It is a lot easier to be friends with someone who has a positive outlook on life rather than someone who has a negative outlook. Greed is often related to negative emotional states such as anger, anxiety and despair as it drives you to a point where only that one desire in in focus. Anger, anxiety and despair are all negative emotional feelings that are all related to mental illnesses. In our world today it is said that every one in four people in the world will be affected by a mental illness at some point in their lives. The Happiness of a persons life is a lot more important than their wealth and status, because why be super rich when you are not happy living the life you live? It is often perceived that with money comes happiness but this need for money fuelled by greed is what causes depression and puts you in the vicious cycle of anxiety and restlessness. These feelings are often experienced when we long for some possession and believe in the false reassurance that upon gaining it we will be put at ease and satisfied. The key to happiness in life should not be determined by how much money you have but by the quality of your living; its quality not quantity.

S-Throughout the movie, the repetitive use of Jerry only being shown in a one shot shows how his compelling desire and greed have driven him into isolation. E- A one shot shows only one person in a frame giving the impression that they are all alone and solitary. Through Jerry’s ambition and desire for money he has pushed out all of the important things in his life and is left drowning in his problems, alone. He has allowed the idea of material possessions and greed to cloud his judgement where it is no longer about his family but all about getting the money he craves. Jerry is a prime example of someone who is always wanting more than he needs, constantly urged by greed. Throughout the movie Jerry is only ever seen in a shot by himself, never with his wife and never with his son. They are a family, they are meant to be seen as a cohort but instead he is engulfed by the idea of money driven by greed, and would put his family in danger in order to get what he desires. In this case greed has totally taken over his life and everything is blurred out, apart from the idea of money. Every one shot he is seen in portrays how greed has caused him to lose track of what is important in life, leaving him empty and alone. X- Jerry is constantly seen in a whole scene or shot by himself. An example of this is the scene where Jerry is in his office and is shown in a one shot mid shot talking on the phone to the auditors about the cars. From looking at the shot in this scene, it shows Jerry alone, drowning in his ever growing pile of problems. The shot is taken from outside his office behind the blinds and gives the impression that he is in a prison cell, where his greed has driven him to the point where he has gone past the law and is soon to pay the price. This particular one shot shows the point in the movie at which he has realised his crimes are soon to be exposed. At this point he is well and truely alone and is left with nothing as everything he loves he has driven away. Y- Greed is a powerful feeling that blinds someone until it is too late. The consequences of not stopping while you can, leaves you with nothing, where you have been stripped of the joys in your life. Two of the most important things in life are friends and family as these are what gives you experiences and moments to cherish forever. Family and friends are a crucial element to everyone’s life as those connections with loved ones give you joy and laughter, something that you can not buy. Marge and Norm are the family in the movie that Jerrys family could have been. Both of them are almost never seen in a one shot because they are seen as a family, always sharing moments and love. Shots in movies show a lot about the relationships between groups of people, and for Jerry he threw it all away, all for a bit of money. Money is only desired because it is something that is made out to sound as though it will give you a better life. The reality is that these people in your life are essential because without them who would you call when you need advice? a shoulder to lean on? an ear to listen? These relationships are crucial and improve the quality of life as everyone needs someone to talk to and support them through thick and thin.

“Greed is a bottomless pit which exhausts the person in an endless effort to satisfy the need without ever reaching satisfaction”. The theme of greed is constantly highlighted throughout the movie through the use of specific characters shown in a low angle, Carl’s dialogue, and Jerry Lundeguaard only seen in one shots. These key film techniques all help to portray the idea of greed and the deceptive appearance behind it. The Coen Brothers have strategically used these three film techniques throughout the movie Fargo, to intelligently portray the theme of greed to the audience.

Statement of intent- I am writing as essay about how film techniques portray a theme in a text. In this case the movie I am basing my essay off is Fargo and I am using three different film techniques to depict the theme of greed throughout the movie. These three film techniques are specific characters shown in a low angle, Carl’s dialogue, and Jerry Lundeguaard only shown in one shots, which all help to develop the idea of greed. Film techniques and characters are very crucial parts of the movie that the Coen Brothers have intelligently used to convey the key themes to the audience.

Essay points

Intro

The purpose of an intro is to state what your essay will cover, highlighting each of the body paragraphs. It also needs to introduce the topic of your essay, utilizing key words from the question. For a literature essay it needs to state the texts title and the creator of the text

The secret to a good introduction is T.A.K.O

Title

Author

Key words

Outline of points/ideas

The body paragraph

The purpose of the body paragraph is to expand on one of the points you brought up in your explantation

One paragraph = one point

sexy– statement: a sentence that writes what the paragraph will be about, Explain: further explanation what the statement means, example: provide an example that backs up your statement, Your opinion/why: the most important part of the paragraph

Y- What it needs- you have written a great statement, you have explained it well and provided an example to strengthen it. now the opinion… 1. directors and writers purpose, beyond the text and real world/intertextuality, linking back to the statement

link to another Coen brothers film because the techniques are universal e.g the ballad of buster Scruggs- watch this

conclusion– to summarise the info from the essay, it must cover: title of text/film, relate back and utilise the word from the question, restate what was in each of your body paragraphs, no new info is allowed.

ESSAY QUESTIONS:

the single most important thing to do with as essay is, make sure you are answering the question you have been asked, understanding the question is vital, need to be able to identify the key words in the question and the th connection of elements and the direction the question is pointing you.

the keywords tell you what you need to do and what you need to discuss in your essay, once you know the keywords you will know how to shape your essay, all questions have 2 parts.

question 1- analyse how one or more important events influenced a change in a character

analyse how language features were used to create a powerful emotional response in the audience

analyse how language features were used to show the positive and/or negative aspects of one or more characters

body paragraphs- The character of Jerry has an accent in the film that suggests he is a nice person.

The Coen brothers take advantage of close ups on Jerrys face to imply he is isolated.

The application of high angles on the main character Jerry flaunts his lack of power throughout the film.

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marge has an affectionate accent in the film that demonstrates she is a friendly, amicable person.

The Coen brothers repeatedly shoot marge in a two shot with her husband Norm to display that she is a family orientated civilian

the Coen brothers apply the use of low angles to depict carls dominance and intimidation.